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not. alone .2 by =denkyo:icondenkyo:

Categories Photography > Conceptual

©2009 =denkyo
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the second in the not. alone series.
Shot on a frozen lake.
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"For the world, you are somebody, but for somebody you are the world"
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first of the series: not. alone (received a DD)

...and the vintage re-edit of it: not. alone - vintage re-edit

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=khrisjuhlin Apr 14, 2009, 10:59:13 PM
At first I would have said that it would be better if there was only one guy in the image. BUT once I looked closely and saw what you were trying to show through your quote, I thought it was perfect! I really like how you created the contrast in colours of blues and red, making the guy the focus of attention.

I find this piece quite original and well taken. The red guy in very centered and the fog as well. You managed to make a really good balance between it all, which makes it very pleasing to look at. The colours just stunning; not too shocking not to boring; you created good contrast, a good focus point and overall it really shows that you know what you are doing and that you have a very good eye.

I like to give constructive critique, but I can't find anything negative to comment on. Good job!
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=diado Apr 14, 2009, 12:57:23 AM
I actually prefer this to the other one. Lots of contrast, nice perspective between the two people leading you into the shot and giving a good sense of scale. An all-round great shot. Nice work!

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~patstome Apr 14, 2009, 1:08:07 AM
das finde ich ja noch viel besser als die DD version :nod:

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=denkyo Apr 14, 2009, 1:09:38 AM
thank you!
hehe^^ Actually, I prefer this one, too :D

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=denkyo Apr 14, 2009, 1:11:05 AM
hehe^^ finde ich auch, tja, aber was soll man da machen...:XD:

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`Navagon Apr 14, 2009, 2:46:58 AM
I definitely prefer this one. The strong contrast and rich texture coupled with the superb composition make for a very striking image.
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=denkyo Apr 14, 2009, 2:52:58 AM
thank you, I like this one much more, too :)

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*rorymac666 Apr 14, 2009, 3:45:01 AM
WOW!

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=denkyo Apr 14, 2009, 3:55:03 AM
:D :D :D

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=denkyo Apr 14, 2009, 3:55:12 AM
? ^^

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OLYMPUS CORPORATION
C5060WZ
10/3200 second
F/4.0
6 mm
80
Nov 30, 1999, 12:00:00 AM

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